If you’ve written a draft and want to make sure it’s commercially viable, reader-ready, and aligned with publishing expectations, this in-depth manuscript assessment is for you.

I’ll read your manuscript twice, prepare a detailed editorial report, and schedule 2 x 1-hour coaching sessions with you to discuss the report and map out your next steps. 

The report will cover:

• Structure and flow – Is the content logically sequenced? Does the narrative or argument build effectively?
• Voice and tone – Does the writing sound like you? Is it consistent, compelling, and authentic?
• Clarity and readability – Are your ideas clearly expressed? Are there sections that need tightening or expanding?
• Audience alignment – Is the book pitched at the right level for your ideal reader?
• Big picture feedback – What’s working, what’s not, and what could be done to elevate it to a publishable standard?
• Storytelling – Does the book follow a compelling arc? I’ll show you how to apply the 5-step Hero’s Journey framework to enhance emotional impact. You’ll also receive my exclusive 3-part video training on storytelling, which can be repurposed for your keynotes, emails, and marketing.
• Publishing pathways – Should you go traditional, hybrid, or self-publish? I’ll provide clear advice on which route suits your goals best—plus guidance on royalties, marketing, and distribution.
• Strategic opportunities – Based on your content and goals, I’ll suggest partnerships, speaking gigs, media angles, and other promotional opportunities you may not have considered.

This is not a copyedit or proofread. It's a strategic deep dive designed to give you clarity, confidence, and a clear path forward. 

Fee:

The fee for this program is $0.25 per word + GST (Minimum word count is 40,000 = $10,000 + GST).